English is my first language and I am not an expert! I will try to help you with what you wrote above.
“I have applied to VA board in May 2010” … I applied to the VA board in May 2010. <end of sentence>
“they told me i am missing core course Financial Accounting which i just complete.” … They told me I am missing core financial accounting courses. I have since completed these courses.
“Can some one tell me how much time now will it take to get my NTS” … Can someone tell me how long it will take to get my NTS? ….and to answer your question, I got my NTS about 6 weeks after I sent in all of the required information.
“and all the good stuff to give my exam” ….not sure what you are trying to say here, but it should say “to take my exam”
“As i have already purchased Becker course in May 2010 and with new changes I am ready to get my new material.” I am having trouble trying to understand this as well but I will try… I purchased the Becker course in May 2010, but with new changes for 2011, I may need to get new material.
“As I just want to start with this Dream of my to become CPA.” …. I just want to start my dream of becoming a CPA.
So the new paragraph would say:
I applied to the VA board in May 2010. They told me I am missing core financial accounting courses. I have since completed these courses. Can someone tell me how long it will take to get my NTS? I purchased the Becker course in May 2010, but with new changes for 2011, I may need to get new material. I just want to start my dream of becoming a CPA.